As promised, here is the first draft of chapter one of my new novel, Tomorrow Will Come and It Will Be Just Like Today.
It is, intentionally, a dark, introspective psychological piece and I will, naturally, be very interested in hearing if I’ve managed to achieve this dark introspection without the reader losing his or her wish to continue. There are a couple of story hooks, and, in spite of their difficulties, I think my characters are quite engaging, but I am of course too close to it at this stage to know how successful it is (or isn’t!)
Take a look when/if you have time and feel free to share any comments here.
Tomorrow Will Come and It Will Be Just Like Today — Chapter One.