As promised, here is the first draft of chapter one of my new novel, Tomorrow Will Come and It Will Be Just Like Today.
It is, intentionally, a dark, introspective psychological piece and I will, naturally, be very interested in hearing if I’ve managed to achieve this dark introspection without the reader losing his or her wish to continue. There are a couple of story hooks, and, in spite of their difficulties, I think my characters are quite engaging, but I am of course too close to it at this stage to know how successful it is (or isn’t!)
Take a look when/if you have time and feel free to share any comments here.
Tomorrow Will Come and It Will Be Just Like Today — Chapter One.
I’m excited to read this at some point soon. I’ve bookmarked you to read when I get home from work.
Bumped you off alphainventions and thought I’d drop a line. Check me out at learndaily.wordpress.com.
I look forward to hearing what you think of it, Tyler! Also, it’s great to know that at least some of those hits I get through alphainventions are from visitors who stick around long enough to have a quick read… sometimes it’s difficult to be sure LOL
I’m just about to shut down for the evening but I’ll certainly drop by tomorrow and have a look at your blog.
Hope to see you around again.