Today came as something of a relief. I have not succeeded, due to a number of distractions and research requirements, in progressing any further with the chapter outlines for We Are Watching, but last night I found myself telling my parents all about it — what I had so far, where I hoped it would go, why I wanted to write it and so on — and the simple act of speaking it, of hearing the story in outline form, rekindled the flame. With this kind of novel, there can be a tendency for it to sound a little silly in an unplanned oral presentation. But it stood up remarkably well. My parents, who are the perfect critics (direct and, yet, well aware that the novel will have a stronger plot foundation than a spoken outline) got it right away. A very productive conversation.

It also helped me see where I didn’t want to go with the story. In many respects, it is an allegory for the current surveillance situation in the UK — but I saw quite quickly that it is fairly vital that it remain an allegory. I do not want becoming a “government conspiracy” novel involving databases etc. All of that will be there, but as a subtext.

On the subject of government and databases, I today read with a mix of relief and scepticism that no decision on the giant database — intended to contain details of all phone calls, emails and Internet use — has yet been taken. More debate has been called for. Whilst reading this article, however, a piece of advice within it struck me as one worth repeating. It’s something many of us will have been aware of for a very long time, but it never does any harm to be reminded of such things.

“There will be more people look at your internet information than look at a postcard when you write it…”

Take care out there ;)

3 Responses to “We Are Watching — On Novels and Databases.”


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  2. Will Rhodes Says:

    http://willrhodes1961.wordpress.com/2008/07/22/police-state/

    Now if you know a lot of people in Britain, Gary – pass that around will you?

  3. Gary Murning Says:

    Most of the people I know are already well familiar with this, will. Unfortunately, however, I only know an extremely small percentage of the UK population. I do my bit to try to get more information out there but I’m sure you know how it is. With some it’s like banging one’s head against the wall. If I hear that “well, if you’ve got nothing to hide, you’ve got nothing to worry about”-argument one more time I think I’ll start taking a cricket bat to people’s heads, you know? :)


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